ode keby si spravil cosi s tou stylistikou:)

k obsahu: to videnie mi pride ze je ostre miestami az prekvapivo, a potom na to pride sprska
hm, ako ked si predstavis lampu ako svieti do tmy a pozorujes ten luc, a potom tou lampou zatrasies;)
stracaju sa tam potom tomu kontury (vela mi to v tom texte sposobuju "synonyma" so spojkami ci, niekde su navyse, tvaria sa ako prvky snaziace sa naoko zaostrit(dovysvetlit), ale castokrat skor zmatu

a preco dalej ? , nie je to skor "inak" ?

// So make what is yours and do not take what is others, for this is The Universal Law!
For if You break this Universal Law, The Universe will surely react to it, This is known to The Profane as Karma.