ja mozem ty povedat moje pripomienky [sice nesom fotograf, ale skusam]
ten druhy obraz ma moc agresivny cervena farba, taking into account that the lady has such expression
and in both cases the light is too hard, and it cause spots in the colour that destroy the continuum of the atmosphere
and in first picture, those lines on top of her had are "strange"
and in both cases, the "ceiling" of the picture is to close to her head and this squeezes her and the feeling taht should roam there

and personally i dont like this cutie decorations like leaves and stars, for i feel taht they turn the picture into a Xmas tree or some tableaux to be sold on market...

i hope no offence i staken, and as i said, i aint a photographer
[but i replied u coz i know from my experience that some feedback is important]