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"I felt a VAINLY urge"-???

"when suddenly a man step into my focus"- stepS

"We were just standing in front of each other"-nezmysel

"he nodded as to agree. "-he nodded IN AGREEMENT

"At that moment "-IN THAT INSTANT

"leaving a steam of insanity behind"-???

"hard breath"-???

"and I spit "-and I SPAT

"wide opened eyes"-gramaticky mozno spravne,ale clumsy...

"As a reaction on my movement"-reaction TO my ...aj tak clumsy

"and GAVE me two painful whacks"-nezmysel

"I sighed kneely "-???

" my enjoyment IN his fingering"-nezmysel

"Maybe I get myself this time around"-nezmysel (alebo nejaky husty negersky slang?)

"and slip his fat cock"-SLIPPED, lepsie snad SHOVED

"so hard that I thought"-SO HARD I THOUGHT

"scream’s "-SCREAMS

"hearing my scream’s ?echo?"-ste to robili v kamenolome?ECHO-OZVENA

while reaching a wet orgasm."-ty?on?nevyplyva to z textu. kazdopadne zle, WHILE zaameno REACHED A WET atd.

"After we finished I"-clumsy, WHEN WE WERE FINISHED I atd.

"shameful look"-nezmysel


Nevesat hlavu, nikto uceny z neba nespadol.J

Nie je zaco.

















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sponka
 sponka      16.07.2004 - 16:40:06 , level: 1, UP   NEW
nezmysel?
asi si nebol v zivote v anglicky hovoriacej krajine.polovica tyx ,,nezmyslov,, sa pouziva bezne:))

Nevesat hlavu, nikto uceny z neba nespadol.

Nie je zaco.

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_862535
 _862535      16.07.2004 - 23:48:37 , level: 2, UP   NEW
tak teda diky ,este keby si napisala ktora polovica...ta tretia?

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beker
 beker      15.07.2004 - 22:23:19 , level: 1, UP   NEW
jé mén, aj nou ju ar d besd tíča..luks lajk a šit in máj pajp

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huxley
 huxley      15.07.2004 - 21:15:17 , level: 1, UP   NEW
uznavam ze niktore su chybne ale o niktorych nemas ani paru;)))

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blue frequency
 blue frequency      15.07.2004 - 20:53:50 , level: 1, UP   NEW
ked si taky mudry, napis nieco sam!!! ;)

..ved to nie su prijimacky do SAV...

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_862535
 _862535      15.07.2004 - 21:49:42 , level: 2, UP   NEW
to sice nie su ale ja zastavam nazor ze ked uz nieco robim tak by som to mal spravit poriadne( a kedze nemam cas napisat nieco poriadne co by malo nejaku hodnotu tak som zatial nenapisal nic.). Na literarnu kvalitu nepicujem lebo myslim ze o to tej dievcine ani nejde ale naco preboha pise po anglicky skor ako sa po anglicky nauci?

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huxley
 huxley      15.07.2004 - 22:35:23 , level: 3, UP   NEW
pici! sak som pisala diplomovku z anglictiny tak nepicuj..ja ked pisem tak to po sebe necitam..pride mi to zbytocne...no asi nabuduce si budem krok po kroku prechadzat stylistiku,lexikologiu i celu lexikalnu semantiku aby ma nenasral taku v****y K***t ako ty!
pici!

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_862535
 _862535      16.07.2004 - 23:46:32 , level: 4, UP   NEW
prosim ta povedz mi na jaku skolu to chodis, hned sa tam idem prihlasit...totiz, hladam lahku skolu, fakt lahku

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koleno
 koleno      16.07.2004 - 16:45:40 , level: 4, UP   NEW
hlavne kliiidek huxley sak ide o hovno s lentilkami...

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sponka
 sponka      16.07.2004 - 16:41:14 , level: 4, UP   NEW
jj.hlavne tu je to dolezitejsie ako na diplomovke:)))

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huxley
 huxley      15.07.2004 - 22:36:57 , level: 4, UP   NEW
a mozno som to trochu prehnala..

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valdemar
 valdemar      15.07.2004 - 20:34:29 , level: 1, UP   NEW
Ty sa zamestnaj ako kontrolór spisovnosti v pornoproduktoch ;P